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Literature Text
It’s been
months
since I first started thinking
that
maybe
I should write
you
a few words.
There’s been so many
moments
where I was thinking
thoughts
and words
describing what
you mean
to me.
They were all
perfect
(like you)
at describing
what you
make
me
feel.
But they were all
too long and
too complicated.
I was afraid
my feelings would get
lost
in the mess
of it all.
So I created
this
to let you know that
one day,
when I myself would be a little
less messy,
I’d write you something big and bold you could understand.
Cause this I just a promise poem.
months
since I first started thinking
that
maybe
I should write
you
a few words.
There’s been so many
moments
where I was thinking
thoughts
and words
describing what
you mean
to me.
They were all
perfect
(like you)
at describing
what you
make
me
feel.
But they were all
too long and
too complicated.
I was afraid
my feelings would get
lost
in the mess
of it all.
So I created
this
to let you know that
one day,
when I myself would be a little
less messy,
I’d write you something big and bold you could understand.
Cause this I just a promise poem.
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This poem is
gorgeous-
like you,
The who
I can always
come home to,
Rain or scald,
my voyage
to your heart,
Markedly unbound,
no finish line,
just a start.
(Unlike you, I actually have no clue what I'm doing. You're poems are beautiful and feel directly from your soul.)
I love you sweetheart. Thank you for the beautiful prose in my honor. I'll cherish it forever- like you.
This poem is
gorgeous-
like you,
The who
I can always
come home to,
Rain or scald,
my voyage
to your heart,
Markedly unbound,
no finish line,
just a start.
(Unlike you, I actually have no clue what I'm doing. You're poems are beautiful and feel directly from your soul.)
I love you sweetheart. Thank you for the beautiful prose in my honor. I'll cherish it forever- like you.